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3. Peacekeeper Offer

🕑 Added 2024-12-24 14:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Thomas V.

This chapter did alleviate some of my concerns, and made me quite a bit less distrustful of the Guild as a whole - though I’m pretty sure that Rylan is responsible for those Untethered people, and Elana just has no idea. I dearly hope Rylan doesn’t snap and kill his sister over it when she confronts him about it, but I wouldn’t be surprised either. That asshole is a ticking time bomb, and when (not if) he goes off the deep end the consequences will be pretty far reaching. On a different note, it feels a bit strange how Alex didn’t explain the spider stuff in more detail. Just something in the vein of “humans aren’t the only sapient creatures you can find in those Rifts” or something would’ve gone a long way towards justifying not harming them. It’s a pretty big request, and you’d think he’d want to explain in as much detail as possible. All things considered this was a pretty great chapter, and Alex’ justifications for rejecting becoming a Peacekeeper are pretty solid. I do feel like it’s something he doesn’t want to tangle with just yet, with Rylan out there about to sabotage everything. I’m kinda looking forward to all the politics stuff honestly.

Corwin

Probably have Elena segway into that when Alex turns down the Peacekeeper offer and she removes her mask and talks more openly.

OverXelous

We are working toward something like this! Great guess :)

Corwin

The Guild should offer training and classes to help people to Awaken, and see if Alex can help teach Mana classes for Awakened and non-Awakened.

small_brain_boy

I wonder if Alex and Olivia are gonna share a moment at midnight. Maybe probably?

OverXelous

Fixed!

V L

Fix: << The decision of whether or not we **fail**>>


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