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8. Training Equipment

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 14:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Pokox

I do feel like you are keeping the world a little too normal given time frames. Governments would drastically change how they function and honestly with something like portals I can't see a way they don't declare martial law and that causing much more friction by this point. Not really something you can probably change but just something to think about. Ultimately governments are run based ok control and the only way to control would to be much more difficult and honestly the amount of war that would break out based on power differences would be staggering.

Felix Skinner

We have some question for you *questions about into New Years *about it on New Year's

ReadingObsessed

Politics evolve, some might say devolve, but is constantly shifting. My advice if you're willing to hear it is to make it a bit polarizing at this stage where the world is shifting. Those at the top know about the chance of global integration failure and they're starting their new wave of propaganda. You could even go a bit further and have the *unaffiliated* news prop up the MC without the backing of the HA. If it already looks like they're backing him then he might capitulate. "If you believe your government is meant to protect the little guy then do your part and join the AG!" "You are the only ones your family can rely on! When push comes to shove who will be there for them? Gain the strength to protect them! Join the HA."

nathbregou27

Thanks for the chapter! There's a mistake at the end of paragraph 17: "Elena and made at her house" -> "Elena had made at her house" And also at the last paragraph: "watched go walk away" And paragraph before that "to sped up" -> "to speed up"

OverXelous

It's turning into the Wild West out there, lots of power walking around and lots of people on edge. I really do sympathize for the Hunters Association or the government in a situation like this. Trying to play by the rules, or get others to play by the rules- while you yourself are supposed to be playing by those very rules when no one else wants to... Then the moment you step out of line, everyone points fingers. I love exploring this dynamic that neither organization (HA or AG) are really good. You know? They both have agendas and perspective makes a big difference on which organization the characters think is "good." Both have good points and think they're doing what's best, both are larger organizations which also have some people doing some shady things in their names, bending the rules for what the think is the greater good. One is just doing it under the pretense of being a governing body and safety for the people. The other is doing it under the pretense of freedom.

OverXelous

That's a good catch, thanks for pointing it out. I'll touch up the wording. It's definitely meant to read like Alex gave the information before Christmas. There is no set deadline that the characters know of, in fact from Elana's source and knowledge, she said it would take several years to come about (but still no specific timeline). Thanks again!

ReadingObsessed

There's a reason agents in shows always start with "I'm special agent ___..." It's procedure and first day shit. That they didn't do it was likely intentional and that they were not there to do anything legal/ with approval.

OverXelous

Yeah this would definitely be a Sam kinda thing!!

Corwin

Alex should see what happens if you put mana into plants that are here on earth. Maybe not anything, but a control experiment with natural seeds could be interesting especially if it works and maybe a title given

Ron

This is ambiguous. "I guess they figured out it was me who gave you that information about the consequences of failing the integration before Christmas.” Was the information given before Christmas or is next Christmas the deadline for integration. It reads to me as the latter but keeping up with the storyline, it might be that information was given before Christmas since Eura didn't give an integration deadline that I remember.


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