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19. Sidelined

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 14:00:07 +0000 UTC

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C Smith

I think alternating would be a much better approach. The first volume had a good mix I thought, but this is too much all in a row, for me.

spoonful_of_sugar

I personally think the pace is perfect. It feels organic, and we actually spend some down time and peace necessary for Alex to ease off the nightmarish Epic Rift. Plus, it rises the anticipation for the next Rift run or whatever trouble they get up to lmao

small_brain_boy

I KNEW THAT PIECE OF GARBAGE WOULD DO SOMETHING!!! I hope Alex gets to beat him up again. This guy really deserves an ass whoopin.

Beeees!

I feel like I really enjoyed the consolidation of gains character building and prep, and now is the perfect time to start escalating. Excited for the next stage of this adventure

V L

I’ve enjoyed the current pacing. I know a lot of people read for number go up but I enjoy character development as well. The meeting with Sam’s parents? Hella important. So good. I loved it. That good good family tension. Yum. And the fact that we’re excited to get back into rifts puts us right there with Alex and co. Also the plot point was made lol. But that’s just me.

OverXelous

Ahh no! Haha, well that's a bummer! Hopefully with some action and progression coming up, it'll suck you back in :) Always enjoy seeing your comments. Thanks for reading and supporting the story!

OverXelous

Thanks for reading and supporting the story. It has been a slow start and while I do love writing this stuff, I realize that I'm probably not introducing stakes or tension early enough in either volume. It's something I'm taking into consideration for the next volume. I've almost written things in the first two where it's a lot of slice of life, then a lot of action and progression, in two halves. I feel like it would be better to introduce stakes early, and have both of them be a bit more spread out and alternate in the story a bit more.

Ron

Aha, subterfuge. No way it was Olivia. My bet is still on Rylan ultimately being behind it all.

J.D. Green

Thank god he has decided to stop being passive. Even though these chapters have had some important world building, I read for number go up. It feels like there hasn't been any number go up it seems for this entire volume so far. I hope this next arc starts soon.

ReadingObsessed

Glad the pace will pick back up. I recognize how he needed to destress and unwind after that but I found myself not reading these chapters right as they came out like normal.


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