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23. Facades

🕑 Added 2025-01-21 14:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Roy Robinson

I’m all for building up the team but this chapter really puts the race in perspective. Not just between Alex and Rylan, although that is meaningful, but staying ahead of the curve to maintain his own voice and freedom. Might is going to make right in this new world, and the social conventions and niceties of civilized society are likely going out the window, at least until some future point of homeostasis when the new elite have created their own power structures that certainly won’t be democratic.

OverXelous

Haha!!

Kris Boxall

Reading Rylan this chapter making me think men really will do anything rather than go to therapy

small_brain_boy

YES!!!

OverXelous

Hahah, request has been noted!

small_brain_boy

Can the scene of Alex beating up Rylan be longer next time? I'd like to enjoy it more this time around.

Ron

On a separate note, Game On. Now Alex has a HUGE reason to advance. That said, making his team stronger is important. However, if this is normal advancement, his leveling should slow down while everyone else is still going fast. So while he will stay ahead of his team, as they go through the lower levels, they should get closer as time goes by. And obviously Rylan put the note in the system :)

Thomas V.

Alex was gonna have a conversation with Elana (as mentioned in this chapter) to ask her a few questions - presumably, that Peacekeeper note that kept him from being accepted into any Rifts would’ve been one of them. Not bringing this to Elana’s attention when the Rift event is about to start is a *bad* move. And why would I insult the author like that? This is entirely in character for Alex, it’s completely in line with how he’s been written so far. That doesn’t make it any less idiotic, but it’s not bad writing by any means.

Ron

I don't understand what questions you are talking about. Also, are you saying it was dumb of Alex as written or dumb of the Author to write Alex that way?

V L

Damn he’s worse than Alex’s brother. 🫠🫠🫠

Thomas V.

Oh yes Rylan, because you *totally* earned all that family wealth yourself, and those connections you’re bragging about are *totally* because of your own merits, and you’re *totally* not one of those entitled brats that thinks they’ve actually *earned* everything they’ve gotten handed to them on a silver platter. No no, everyone who didn’t have the *luck* to be born with all those advantages is, of course, inherently inferior to you. And anyone inferior to you can, of course, only accomplish anything through luck, while everything you do is solely because of your own efforts. Totally. On a serious note: Alex, you should’ve asked those questions, and not doing so is dumb. You’re here anyway, it wouldn’t have taken more than another half an hour or so, and the answers to those questions would’ve helped you with the whole “preparing” part. Not asking them means Rylan achieved his goal with this exchange, and leaves you less informed on very important topics. It’s really, really dumb to just leave like this.


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