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Chapter 24 - Celestial Sect War

🕑 Added 2024-10-29 02:01:51 +0000 UTC

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OverXelous

I’ll go back and read though it again today, thanks for the feedback!

luxrus

You make him seem completely dumb in this chapter—especially considering he had a “bottom line” before. Obviously these are not adventurers, and yet he behaves so weirdly… might want to edit this obe

OverXelous

Hmm, I'll need to go back and read the chapter. But I think by this point, he's talked with Red Beanie and that group when he first went into the boar Rift and they'd given him advance notice about dismissing the quest notification to try and take in your surroundings in case of danger.

Al

Noting, he's supposed to be a gamer and completely ignored his quests. May wanna tighten up a bit, is he criminally oblivious or does he have some manner of experience?

Beeees!

What a twist. I wonder if the cultivators can either see the rift and if so can they invade earth?!

lenkite

" He threw wand potshots over his shoulder" I thought his aim had improved ? He didn't hit even once ? Also, why can't he just hit the legs of the horse ?


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