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Thinking About MORE!

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 17:56:21 +0000 UTC

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Casual Ham

I'm always a fan of more to read, but make sure you don't burn yourself out! I'm not as into berserker builds in general, but I like the world and characters you've created so far, and I'm sure there are readers that would love to get ahead in both series. You could always make them separate tiers so people can choose if they want to read Spell Weaver, Berserker, or both.

OverXelous

Thanks for checking it out! I've definitely grown as a writer since I started those early chapters of Alex, lol.

Rip Woodham

Tried Berserker, think it's great and I'd love more. Between the title and the cover art, I was expecting something vastly different. At least until the rage kicked in at the end of the last chapter and I think that was the least enjoyable part of it for me so far. But very good writing imo. The main character is very different from Alex and I think you wrote him even better. I hope we'll continue to get his perspective occasionally after the side story ends.

Rip Woodham

It's great to know you have a military background, I don't have any but people I know with one usually align more with my belief of how poorly government and people would fare/react in a situation like these fictional integrations. I've been worried about your interpretation since we haven't really seen much of it yet and people have been getting along fine so far, oblivious. Regardless of if you agree that's good experience to bring to writing.

OverXelous

This is great feedback. Haha, I want your totally unbiased opinion ;) I have a bigger backlog from Patreon (writing Chapter 74 today), so I could certainly extend the Patreon releases over RR, but I want there to be some sort of backlog in case I get sick or for any other reason that I am able to keep your Patreon experience consistent. Also, I am along the same lines of thinking as you. I'd love to see what you think about Berserker. I have a very heavy military background personally, so I'm at least writing about some things there that I've experienced and know. It's been a bit more about finding a balance between including things I know to be accurate and writing things in a way that people without a military background could understand! But yeah, Jonathan is definitely meant to be sort of 'me stronk' sort of character to, hopefully, appease some of the readers who dislike Alex in those early chapters. Also I just love Jonathan and am really looking forward to him showing up as a side character in the main series!

Rip Woodham

Speaking for myself I'd certainly be happier with 5 releases a week. 3 is usually the lowest I'd be interested in, honestly. My favorite thing is to enjoy new releases with coffee every morning. :) I'd recommend you increase the amount that's ahead on patreon eventually though, so if people unsub it would be a long time before they could get current again on royalroad, but not too long. So they stay subbed as long as it's affordable. I absolutely have no ulterior motive in suggesting this. ;) I can't comment on Berserker since I haven't read it yet, when I looked there were only two chapters and it didn't seem as good as this story (and shorter chapters I think? I like longer chapters). I saw you were getting some flak about Alex on RR, but I think he is the type of MC that makes a story more appealing than some run of the mill 'me stronk' character. And the military perspective is a lot harder to pull off realistically to me, especially in an integration story. It sounds like there are a lot more chapters now or will be soon though, so I will have to check it out soon.

Jake Johnson

Absolutely *I* want Berserker


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