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47. Grumpy Mentor
🕑 Added 2025-02-14 14:15:02 +0000 UTCAlex slumped deeper into the extra reading chair in his office. Several times over the last hour, he had relocated within the small space to change the environment as much as he could. Now, though, the weight of the amulet hung heavy against his chest. Valtherion floated nearby, and his usually energetic attitude was dulled significantly from their constant channeling of mana through the early afternoon.
“Val hungry,” the little creature grumbled. His voice was barely above a whisper.
Alex’s fingers twitched, and he forced himself not to grab his phone and attempt to do something to distract himself. His excitement had tapered off long ago, leaving him feeling bored and frustrated at the amount of mana required to activate the spirit item.
“Soon, buddy,” Alex murmured. “I think we’re close.”
He took a deep breath and channeled the last portion of his mana into the artifact. As he pushed his mana into the piece of metal clasped in his hand, he concentrated on the steady stream that was being devoured.
He thought for a moment he could sense a subtle change, and then— There! He felt a presence, ancient and powerful, stirring from within. Alex leaned forward, feeling some of his earlier excitement return.
As he felt the consciousness begin to rise up, Alex grew more and more excited. It became apparent that the spirit within the amulet was much more than just an unthinking spirit item. It was clear how smart and powerful the spirit was, to where Alex actually withdrew for a moment, worried and shocked at the breadth of the mind within the item.
Wow, this is really going to happen! I’m going to get an advanced runic teacher. This is perfect!
“Come on,” he whispered. “Wake up.”
The air in the office seemed to freeze, and Alex could feel the muscles in his back and shoulders tense in anticipation. With little to no fanfare, a voice resonated in Alex’s mind. It sounded deep and gravelly and dripped with a sense of weariness.
There was a great, long sigh within Alex’s mind. “Great. Another one. What kind of novice has the System dumped on me this time?”
Alex straightened in his chair and tried to ignore the slight shakiness in his limbs and the gradually creeping migraine from hours of borderline mana exhaustion. “I’m Alex Moore,” he said aloud, unsure of how he could best respond to the disembodied voice in his mind. “Who are you?”
"Name's Maelis Torvyn." The voice in his mind paused as if expecting some amount of recognition. When none came, a bitter laugh followed his words. "Used to mean something - Runemaster of the Seventh Sphere, The Wandering Scholar, all of that... bah, forget it. Not like any of that matters on this backwater world.”
“It’s great to meet you, Maelis,” Alex said, nodding his head out of habit despite the lack of a visual presence. He couldn’t help but look around, curious to see if there would be some sort of floating spirit watching him while speaking through the amulet. “I’ve been excited to learn about runic magic since I received the amulet.”
A sensation of skepticism washed over Alex as if Maelis were examining him from within. “Eager, are you? And how long have you been awakened? It doesn’t seem like your foundation is very well established. You must be a prodigy of unparalleled talent for the System to grant you an artifact of my caliber.”
Alex hesitated. “About three months, maybe five months if you consider my time in an Epic Rift.”
A groan of disbelief and exasperation flooded through the mental link.
“Three months? By Grimalkin’s balls, is the System on some Dust?” Maelis’ voice grew louder in Alex’s mind. “In my day, one would study for years before even touching an enchantment, let alone wielding an artifact like myself.”
Alex felt the immediate need to be defensive despite not even being sure what the spirit meant. “Well, our world is changing fast, and I’m just trying to keep up and adapt. The System took one of my skills and some knowledge that I had, and in exchange, you were my reward.”
"Right." Maelis's tone dripped with familiar weariness. "So what makes you think you're different from the last thousand kids who thought they were special? You really think you can learn what I know in a few months when, back in my day, people used to spend decades just learning the basics?”
Alex took a breath, ready to explain his theory and how he hoped to use runes in combination with modified rituals rather than the traditional way that they were used in enchanting.
But before he could speak, Maelis’s voice cut through his thoughts once more. "Hold up, kid. Don't bother answering that." Maelis's voice carried the weight of countless similar conversations. "Let me guess - you've got an entire speech prepared about how different you are. Save it. Just... tell me what you can actually do. What's your Status look like?”
Alex frowned but settled back into his chair, preparing for a long conversation. He glanced over at Valtherion, who was eagerly attempting to stick his head inside the Oreo flap to grab multiple cookies out of the tray.
Sighing, Alex ran his hand through his hair. This skeptical old man wasn’t quite the mentor he had been hoping for. Still, he was determined to make the best of the situation and felt that not all hope was lost. Perhaps Maelis was just a potentially strict teacher and not one who might actively try to waste his time.
Alex thought back to his time with Eura and how, when they’d begun to train together, the wise celestial had started with an assessment of his current skills in order to create a custom training plan for him.
“Alright, Maelis, I’ll tell you about my status.”
He started to explain his levels and stats, but Maelis wanted to focus on the skills Alex had gained and what he knew about magic so far. Changing gears, that’s where Alex going over what he had learned about runes from Evan and his own studies in the Foundation’s manual.
There was a moment when Maelis seemed impressed to a small degree at how quickly Alex had leveled, though when Alex explained how he had met the mana spinners and had gained levels rapidly while running from the Shadow Sect, he snorted in derision and all but dismissed Alex.
"Yeah, yeah, fascinating stuff," Maelis interrupted, his voice heavy with familiar cynicism. "Stumbled face-first into power like a drunk finding the ground. And yeah, stumbled is exactly the right word.”
Alex bristled. “I’ve worked hard to get where I am.”
"Sure you have, brat." A tired sigh echoed through their connection. "Look, let's get something straight. This isn't a full-time time. If you want me help, you’ve got to charge up the amulet. System says I have to teach whoever I get stuck with, so I'll show you the basics. Nothing fancy, nothing advanced. You’ll learn the proper way to use runes. Then, as you progress, you get to learn more. That's the deal. Got it?”
Alex’s brows came together, and he felt his fist tighten at his side. The spirit had gone from grumpy to interested to now outright sarcastic and rude. Alex wondered if it was too late to try to trade the item in for something different.
Maelis immediately began droning on about the fundamentals of runes, his tone suggesting he expected Alex to be overwhelmed immediately.
Alex listened intently, but as Maelis delved into the story of the first rune, he couldn’t help but interrupt, hoping to save them both some time. “Maelis, this is really interesting, and I do want to learn this stuff, but I actually have a theory about combining runes into my modified ritual circles. I think we could-”
"Oh, you've got to be kidding me.” Maelis’s voice cut through Alex’s mind as he was interrupted from his lesson. "A theory? After what, three whole months of fumbling around with magic?”
Alex pressed on, some of his enthusiasm returning and taking over his caution. “Yes. Let me show you my notes. See, if we integrate runes into the structure of these modified rituals through the catalyst node, I think I could potentially amplify the effects and totally get rid of the need for—”
“Enough,” Maelis thundered, causing Alex to wince at the interruption and the sheer volume of the spirit’s voice in his head. "Listen, hotshot. I've watched entire civilizations burn. Seen countless 'geniuses' just like you turn themselves into ash because they thought they were too smart to follow the rules. But sure, you've got it all figured out after three months.”
“I’m not saying that I’ve got it figured out, I just-”
“Yeah, yeah. Spill out your theory if you want. You’re only wasting your time, kid, since the mana in the amulet is running out. But I’m telling you, I’ve heard this same thing before.”
“Wait… you’ve heard of someone putting runes and rituals together?”
Maelis snorted. “No. No one I’ve known before was stupid enough to even have the thought. I’m saying I’ve had students who come in with huge ideas, thinking that learning runes their way is going to solve all of their problems. Looking for some kind of shortcut to power, rather than learning the basics and proper theory.”
Alex fell silent and felt the sudden urge to take off the amulet and throw it across the room, but he pulled his emotions in line.
“I’m sure you know more than me. I barely know anything. But what I do know, and from how much I’ve used this magic already… it just feels like there is something there. I’m going to keep going on the theory.”
"Fine." A dark, amusement colored Maelis's voice. "Let's make a bet. You actually pull this off - and I mean actually make it work, not just blow yourself up - I'll teach you whatever you want. But when it fails? You leave me alone for the next century. Let me get some actual sleep for once. How's that sound, genius?”
Alex felt his jaw drop at the absurdity of the offer. One very small competitive part of him felt the desire to accept if only to push himself harder and feel the satisfaction of the spirit’s reaction if he won. However, he knew better than to agree to impossible terms.
“Yeah, no. There’s no way that I’m accepting terms to a bet like that when I’m not even sure my theory will work. That’s exactly why it’s called a theory. I have high hopes that it will work, and I think it would work better and faster if I actually had someone teaching me. But no, for what I lost to get you, I’m not going to risk giving you my word not to awaken you for a hundred more years based on a theory.”
There was a moment of silence before Maelis let out a grumpy humph. “Well, at least you show a glimmer of sense. Maybe there is a bit of Wisdom in your build so far.”
Alex allowed himself a small smile and found it a little strange how Maelis referred to stats as such a natural thing.
"So, you want me to leave you to your groundbreaking research?" The sarcasm in Maelis's voice could have stripped paint.
Alex thought about it for a moment and realized that there was no sense in wasting the time he did have with Maelis, even if all he was learning were the foundations.
“No, please continue with your lesson however you’d like to. Since our time is limited, I should at least get to learn something. I’ll continue to work on my theory on my own and bring it back up when I’ve got some concrete proof that it works.”
Maelis made a grumbling sound before continuing.
"Right. Guess we're doing this. First thing you need to know about runes - and try to actually pay attention - is the concept of the prime rune.” Suddenly, a complex symbol appeared in Alex’s mind’s eye. A light blue, almost holographic image of a complex rune appeared as suddenly as a System window might, and Alex instinctively ducked down to his right and rolled his left shoulder forward, anticipating some sort of blow to land.
“What the…?” he exclaimed. He stood up from his chair and looked around, and no matter how he moved, the floating rune stayed anchored in space where it had originally appeared as if a real floating object.
Val stirred from his cookie-induced slumber. He only lifted his head for a brief moment before curling tighter into a coil on the desk, surrounded by Oreo crumbs.
"Huh. Never seen that trick before, have you?" Maelis's voice carried a hint of smug satisfaction. "Built that feature into the amulet myself, back before... well, doesn't matter now. The point is, I can show you things only you can see.”
Alex shook his head and crouched down to look up at the illusion from a different angle. “But that doesn’t make any sense. There’s no actual mana there. How is there an illusion?”
"Because it's not out there, kid. It's all in your head." A derisive snort echoed through their connection. "Check the amulet if you don't believe me. You'll see the mana working.”
“Wow, that’s really cool,” Alex said. “What are the limitations of this ability? How else could we potentially use this?”
"Look, it's all pretty simple. I can only show you stuff where you're looking. Can't touch anything, can't talk to anyone else unless they’re wearing me, and nobody else can see what I show you. That's it. Just a teaching tool, nothing fancy.”
Alex nodded, still a bit wary but fascinated by the possibilities. “All right, I think I understand. Sorry, what were you saying about this symbol?”
"This isn't the actual prime rune - that's been gone longer than I've been around. It's just... think of it as an echo. The basic building block of everything. Order and chaos in harmony with one another. Everything else comes from this.”
As Maelis began to explain the various components and concepts of runic magic, Alex couldn’t help but feel himself being drawn in despite his earlier frustration with the spirit. Maelis’s knowledge was clearly superior to any manual he had seen so far, and even in his grumpiness, he was a good teacher when discussing the topic at hand.
Alex quickly grabbed one of his leather notebooks and furiously took notes. Even though there was a lot of overlap with the foundations that Maelis was teaching and what Alex and Evan had learned from one of the early manuals, the biggest difference was that Maelis was clearly confident and could answer questions while showing almost interactive images.
"We're about done here." Weariness crept back into Maelis's voice. "Do yourself a favor and drop this theory of yours. You've got a teacher right here who actually knows what they're talking about. But no, you'll probably go right ahead and ignore centuries of proven methods. They always do.”
Alex was already shaking his head before Maelis even finished the sentence. “No, I’m sorry, but I am almost positive that it will work. It may require some more tinkering with the ritual schematics, but I’m almost positive that it will.”
A long, suffering sigh filled Alex's mind. "What's your Willpower stat? Because you've got an A-Rank Rune Mage telling you to drop this nonsense, and you're still dead set on cramming two types of magic together like a square peg in a round hole. You get how crazy that sounds, right?"
Alex gave a nervous chuckle and told the spirit the number his willpower had recently reached. The silence that followed stretched uncomfortably long.
"Well, that’s absurd… and definitely explains it." Maelis's voice carried a mix of resignation and dark amusement. "I don’t know what you’ve got going on, but the System really did a number on you, didn't it? Gave you enough Willpower to be dangerous. Too bad your body still isn’t D-rank. It’s causing your mind to cling to what you want and can't keep up with your oversized ego. I doubt you’re effectively using even half of that…"
Alex shrugged and couldn't bring himself to say anything or argue. He knew he was being stubborn on the topic, and needed to grow more into his Willpower, but something in his gut told him that the idea would work, even if it took a bit more time and effort.
"We're done here." Maelis's presence began to fade. "You want some actual advice? Slow down. Learn the basics. I've seen too many kids like you rush in thinking they're special, only to end up as cautionary tales. Magic's not a race - trying to sprint through it just means you'll trip harder."
As the spirit’s presence faded, Alex leaned back in his chair and rubbed his face. Despite Maelis’s warnings, he felt more determined than ever to pursue his theory. “Well, it wasn’t a total waste, but I don’t feel like I got enough out of that for how much mana Valtherion and I put into the amulet.” He glanced at Val, who was still asleep on the desk with the flap of the Oreo container partly ajar. “What do you think, buddy? Ready to ignore ‘millennia of established teachings’ and change the world of magic?” When he said the words “millennia of established teaching,” Alex did his best to mimic the grumpy voice of Maelis from within his head.
Val stirred slightly and mumbled something that sounded suspiciously like “more cookies.”
Alex laughed and reached for his phone on the main desk. He wanted to talk to Evan and share what he’d learned with his study partner, and get his perspective on integrating the new concepts into what they’d studied about runes so far. He wasn’t quite sure if he should share the knowledge of the amulet with Evan just yet, but so far, he hadn’t done anything to appear untrustworthy.
As he typed out a message to Evan, Alex wondered if Maelis was still able to see through his own eyes or the surroundings, even when the amulet wasn’t active. He decided that before they had another lesson, he would need to spend more time talking with the spirit to understand all the functions and limitations. But he pushed those feelings aside for now.
While he respected Maelis’s knowledge, even if the amulets attitude grated against his nerves, he felt it was more important to trust his own instincts.
“Sorry, Maelis,” he muttered, “I have to try.”
He sent the message to Evan to see if he wanted to get together and set down his phone. Then, he scooped up the notebook he’d used recently to take notes on his progress with the spark rune. He opened it in his left hand while holding up his right to begin practicing the mana-shaping exercises for the rune. He worked on both tasks at the same time after activating [Parallel Mind].
Comments
Jax9d8
Classic old man in some Jewelry! Also, it’s hard to know without seeing the stat sheets of a lot of other Earth humans but the more I think about it the more Maelis’s statement rings true. Alex literally tumbled down a ravine into too much power. Where others can grab with shadow hands, shout real loud, or hit people really hard Alex seems to have powers that exist outside that paradigm. He can split his mind into parallel consciousnesses, create ultra thin threads of mana and control them with a dexterity that would make surgeons cry, and has side stepped his trait’s seeming weakness with Val. It makes me curious about some of the other big fish in the small pond of Earth
small_brain_boy
HA!! Sarcastic Old Person stuck in an object as a teacher is always fun. Can't wait to see how much his experience is going to be ignored and/or disproved.
