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72. Operation Timehold

🕑 Added 2025-04-09 13:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Thomas V.

Honestly, I kind of get why the Deputy Director didn’t want to keep Alex and co in the loop. They’re powerful, independent actors with mostly unknown loyalties, and (as proven by Rylan’s most recent fuckup) the wrong information in the wrong hands can put the entire world in danger. I also feel as if Olivia as she is right now is a liability on the field. She doesn’t understand Nox, doesn’t get its needs and what sets it off (or why), and has made no attempt to control it except through brute force or pacification. She’s a danger to herself and to everyone around her. I hope she figures out her companion soon, or people are gonna get hurt or worse. All that being said, I also understand Alex and co being upset about not being involved, and Olivia’s thought process that she’s not gonna figure things out by staying home, whether they’re correct or not. It’s a complicated situation, and the people involved are responding in ways that at least make sense, even when they’re wrong. It’s really cool to see, and really impressive character writing. Thanks for the chapter!

Graham Bishop

A silly suggestion for the made up time zone. They used 'Standard Earth Time" I was thinking, since it's so important, you could just call it E Time, a.k.a. Echo Time, since these fragments seem to be like echoes of failed integrations, and the time dilation reminds me of like being able to live the same time multiple times, like a time echo. Not sure if it makes any sense, im probably grasping at straws a little, but I thought it could be a fun auggestion

ItWasIDIO!!

Also super shady instead of mismanagement in the name of freedom just straight corrupt mord mincing & back alley deals for personal opinionated importance


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