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21. He Can Do Anything That A Spider Can...

🕑 Added 2025-06-13 13:00:13 +0000 UTC

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OverXelous

Uh, why? What am I missing?

Sauce Master

You might want to look at "Crazy to think that we were sitting at a table and drinking beers just a few days ago.”

OverXelous

He was saying that they shouldn’t go charging in without a plan! Olivia is chastised because that’s exactly what she did before Alex and team came to save her. She was just blindly pushing into the Night territory without much of a plan other than “slaughter”, lol. If it comes across as clunky I can touch it up some!! I struggle to not over explain or give exposition sometimes, so instances like this is me trying to see what ways work and don’t work for simple *not* explaining things. I’m glad you liked the chapter :) thanks for the feedback!

Wilson Lessley

Loved this chapter! Learning about the cards and kings is exciting. I’m curious to see which member of the gang becomes which king. Do Liv and Sarah become Queens, or is King an ungendered title? “He didn’t say it because he didn’t need to. Olivia looked chastised, recognizing what he meant, and agreed with him” I’m probably just being slow, but this paragraph didn’t make much sense to me. Why is Olivia chastised? The first sentence was a bit hard for me to follow


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