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22. Friend or Foe

🕑 Added 2025-06-16 13:00:15 +0000 UTC

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Thomas V.

Sarah’s experiences treating soldiers with PTSD really is coming in clutch here. She’s entirely right: doing or ordering something on this level fucks you up as a person, it breaks something fundamentally human in you. You *do not* want to go there. It leaves you tainted for the rest of your life.

GeneralTusk

Looks like he needs that truth spell

OverXelous

See, it’s interesting you say this. Do you think HOW the scene change was done was jarring or what’s being discussed? There’s a pretty clear scene change there, and it’s really just the opening line that should be jarring, because it then goes into an explanation about how they got to this scene here. Alex is supposed to come off as on the fence, with Olivia willing to do whatever she needs to. Alex is her voice of reason while Sarah is hostile. Sarah’s completely against, and Alex feels similar, but knows that the information is needed one way or another. If he can’t force it out of her, how does he get it? It’s just meant to show a dilemma of actually taking a prisoner and having morals at the same time.

Ron

Boy, everything was great right up until you started talking about torture. It is like the story jumped. Like someone deleted 5 paragraphs and poof, Sarah asks why do you want to torture her when torture was not even talked about. It was jarring. Up until that point, the feeling was that Alex was being compassionate for not killing her outright, then you suddenly are talking about torture. On a second note, you have me wondering if Jonathan is really Jonathan. Oh, is he the character in the short story I didn't read? I think i just realized that.


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