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28. Unexpected Allies

🕑 Added 2025-06-30 13:00:19 +0000 UTC

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OverXelous

Thanks for the feedback Thomas!! I *think* I'm okay with this sort of feeling from readers at this point? She is going through a lot, and its a pretty human thing to get snippy and focus on oneself when things get hard or you're overwhelmed with stress. Olivia's pretty badass, but I want this stress and worry to come across over her fear of losing Nox and all of the rapid changes in the world outside. So, all that to say, I think we're on the same page and I'm glad to know what you're feeling!!

Thomas V.

I kind of feel like Olivia is getting more and more difficult to sympathise with: she seems to have gotten a lot more self-centred, takes out her frustrations on people who had nothing to do with them and is adamantly refusing to address her issues. It feels like she’s been backsliding ever since the situation with Jonathan’s team. I do feel like most of her worries are very understandable: she was away for some pretty crucial bits of story development, did not immediately have the context to understand the disbanding of the Guild (and must’ve felt very isolated as a result of that and other things), and she probably feels like she’s the only one who cares about Nox. She must feel very stressed and more than a bit lonely (and traumatised), and I dearly hope she can rest a bit soon. But holy hell do I hope the team takes some time to help her work through her problems once the immediate stress of Nox’ curse is dealt with, because she simply has not been coming across as a particularly nice or decent person recently. Mostly for her own sake (I don’t feel like she’s fully processed the trauma of her solo trip), but also for the people around her. So here’s to her improving, I guess!

Magosren

Thanks for the chapter, I would wagger they have one either from an elite team or directly the Director, like "The Emperor" or "The World". They influence the Integration too much to not have one or get one soon.

Bmon

Thanks for the chapter and I wonder if the H.A has a person a title already if nor the implications could be dangerous.


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