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58. Walter's Sacrifice

🕑 Added 2025-09-22 13:00:22 +0000 UTC

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Ellie Myra

Martin? I thought Mage-Clone called himself Matthew?

Jeremiah Lee

I'm hoping that these people join his group as a sub faction. It would be really helpful with the manpower for security and it'll give them time to get used to living among people who aren't out to get them.

OverXelous

That is a bit odd. I hope that's not the case for too many others. This group is what he was sent to Philly for to begin with. He enters the Rift after finding out that the leader has an item that affects the membrane of a Rift. Being that one of his main goals at the moment is to learn how the elven ritual works / attempt to recreate it, he goes in after the item and to lend a hand to the people who are trapped. I can understand if the plot feels a bit too fast or something, as it has all happened back to back, but I definitely wouldn't want the reader to feel lost? I believe all of this was stated pretty plainly. If it was confusing or too vague, feel free to let me know.

Brian

I am kinda lost with the last 7 - 10 chapters. Is he in a rift? Did he enter it? He or someone has been fighting in every chapter but why? There doesn't seem seem to be a direction to it. I must have missed something pivotal in the story but I don't know what he is trying to accomplish in this rift (If he is in one) or why he's traveling with / putting up with the idiots he is with. I hope we get back to the story soon.


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