Rivet Comic Pages 61, 62, 63, and 64!
🕑 Added 2022-08-26 07:46:47 +0000 UTCHope you're all having a wonderful time with these pages. I think I want a change of environment. I'm tired of this courtyard, and trying to make the crowd gathered around work without it ripping apart the visual clarity of the panels. >;3 So look forwards to that soon!~
Comments
zaperzero .
Don't worry, this last one isn't pushing us off much farther. >< I know I'm a tease, but I wanted Rivet to not really be a victim of rape so much as a victim of her own choices. Felt wrong to have things escalate without her pushing buttons she shouldn't be pushing. >;) But don't worry, we'll enjoy Stith's situation to the fullest before we move onto anything else.
Skaith
I really enjoyed most of your ideas and was looking forward to them. But we basically jump from one open end to another, and that slowly accumulates a bit of frustration in my (entirely personal) opinion. <.<'
Skaith
Oh come on >w< every time things start to get spicy, you either suddenly c**kblock and end the scene, or introduce a new character and things start all over again. It’s been over sixty pages, and now we start at square one again with a sort of "backstory-filler"? >~>
Mobius Nesbit
Sargasso Swamp Beast pussy got me actin' unwise