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Chapter 191 - Jump!

🕑 Added 2025-02-05 11:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Lucas Onderwater

Hey! Thank you so much for your comments! I think I did Nar a bit of a dissarvice in Arc 1, and that's something that will change on an edit/re-write, to make him a bit smarter and more logical in some ways, though here, I'm really happy you think the same! I think I myself would've tried exactly what Nar just did, especially after hearing how badly aura and aether react together! And this is something we'll expand further into as the series continues! As for a tournament arc, hehe... Maybe? I have some wild ideas at the moment, but I need to see how they align when we get closer! I hope you continue enjoying the story!!

Beater

Side note: is there ever gonna be a tournament arc or something similar? Cuz I’d love to see how Nar compares to the other apprentices. He has to be like decently above average and like you do such an amazing job of showing Nar’s self doubt and imposter syndrome that even, I as a reader, who knows that Nar has MC plot power going on sometimes doubt how good he is. Winning/Doing really good in a tournament would do a lot for his confidence I feel like. IDK THO your story and I love it.

Beater

That’s was a pretty cool chapter. Like idk how to even describe it just everything going down was cool. The whole aura injection scenes makes sense in hindsight. Like I was thinking all the same thoughts as Nar as it was going which is honestly pretty well done so many authors make the mc stupid at certain times so they can have a “ohhh” moment and it’s like duh that’s how that works, but Nar is like actually semi intelligent and doesn’t have that kind of moment here and quickly understands his own misunderstandings. Great chapter all in all. Though Nar does feel easily distracted sometimes lol, like he’s just staring at the fish for a solid minute (atleast in my head, hard to imagine passage of time in a fight scene) after the aura injection doesn’t work which feels a little weird. Anyways Great chapter! On the edge of my seat for the results of this fight.


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