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Chapter 235 - The Most Expensive Hall

🕑 Added 2025-04-22 10:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Lucas Onderwater

I'm really glad to hear that, and I hope you continue enjoying the story! ❤️ And damn, how did I miss 3 "not only" in a row like that? 😱 I've made some changes to the paragraph, and hopefully, it reads a little bit better now? Thanks for letting me know about it!

9crimes

Loving the series so far! The paragraph where Ves introduces the flail seems a little clunky. Maybe remove one or two of the “not only”s? Just my two cents. Thanks for the chapter

Lucas Onderwater

Hi there! I'm really happy that you've enjoyed it, as I kinda worry sometimes if people might not like the POV change chapters 😅 And yes, we will see more of these chapters in the next few days, before swapping back to Nar's POV. Not everyone in the party is going to have a chapter, and only Gad get's a double chapter this time around. But since a lot of growth happens for everyone in the party during Arc 3, we will have different POVs springled throughout it, though Nar is still majorily our main POV. Hope this helps!

Lucas Onderwater

Thanks for reading! :)

CentaureHeart

Thanks for the chapter!

Uroš

Is every party member going to get a couple of personalized chapters like these? I quite enjoyed this different POV


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