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Bimbo Book Club: Deleted Scene (4 ½)
🕑 Added 2024-09-22 04:54:00 +0000 UTCDeleted Chapter: “Bedroom Bimbo”
Wendy learns the joys of being a bimbo after a wild night with her husband.
Originally published as Part 5
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kiwibat
fixed
TudZ4 .
Is there any reason as to why this chapter was deleted?
kiwibat
makes sense. i’ll keep it in mind during the rewrites
Rodger Smith
I felt similar, would have been nice to show that the husband was being manipulated as well and hadn't started off as the instigator.
kiwibat
appreciate the feedback.
Pyrrhus
While it was good I kind of preferred the path that the early stages showed. Having it shift from the friend to the husband was kind of dramatic and a little malicious.
kiwibat
unfortunately not. she was supposed to be a young mom, but who knows where the book could end up next
Nomad
Loved this story, any chance Wendy's daughter is 18 and might find the book laying around the house?
kiwibat
a few hours edit: it's up
stephan
When you re uploading it?
