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Video essay breakdown - Why Do Marvel's Movies Look Kind of Ugly?

🕑 Added 2017-07-11 09:10:58 +0000 UTC
Video essay breakdown - Why Do Marvel's Movies Look Kind of Ugly?

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Great video! Very interesting to learn some about cameras and how films are made.

All power to you man. Been thinking the same thing.

Really liked the break down, mainly because it made me feel less weird about doing a similar break down for your videos and other video essayists. I want to start doing my own video essays, been researching and gathering notes and writing draft scripts for months. Trying to break things down to bullet points and weave them together is so hard sometimes. So I've been breaking down dozens of video essays of varying lengths from dozens of creators trying to find the special formula that makes them good. Backing different people's patreons that offer scripts, notes and behind the scenes stuff to try and be familiar as possible with how different people approach making video essays. I didn't realise that was Patrick's first essay, I can see why that'd make you angry. If it makes you feel any better I don't know how you manage to churn out such high quality videos so damn quickly without them being long and rambly, they're always so smooth and to the point.

Benj

A great breakdown. Although it feels weird to see my favourite YouTube essayist discussing my second-favourite YouTube essayist, who's not even in the same field. :)

Trevor Scott Richard

I agree with what's been said about Patrick's video potentially benefiting from more side-by-sides and on-screen comparisons; in general, I think his video editing is slightly less conducive to the essay structure than, say, someone like Nerdwriter1's. Patrick's certainly gets the job done, though, and I think his actual rhetorical content is excellent. In fact, Mark, I'd like to disagree with your criticism regarding Patrick's overly hasty dismissal of his point about film vs digital. I don't see it as a problem that "[h]e didn’t build up a body of evidence and proof that film is superior to digital", because that isn't really his point. Instead, he focuses on his main point - color grading - so as not to bog down this rather fast-paced video essay. The way I see it, the comment about shooting on film is a sort of aside to the audience, suggesting an alternate way to avoid the problem he's about to discuss before he really gets into his solution. I think the real structural power of this little side comment, though, comes at the end of the video when Patrick returns to it. Referencing this alternate solution to the color grading problem both right before and right after discussing his solution at length creates a nice, sort of bookending effect that helps to engage and then release the viewer's attention, focusing it on the crux of Patrick's argument. Like I said, excellent rhetorical content in this essay. Perhaps, however, it would have been more noticeable had the video editing more effectively lined up with the overall structure of his argument?

Alan Vitek

The comments section for the video is pretty interesting with many people debating items that were and weren't discussed. I feel like one point that may have been lost was branding. Is Marvel intentionally doing the same color grading for branding purposes? I would say yes, but it wasn't really discussed from a marketing angle - more from a storytelling / universe cohesion angle. Additionally, I feel like the "low-black levels trend" started as a digital photo editing trend (a la VSCO) - and maybe was around the same time Marvel switched from film to digital. I can't confirm that that was the case, or that it had any influence on Marvel's decision to color grade in that way, but I can't help but see the parallels in style/timing.

Hugo Pastor

Besides the original video (which is awesome, and I watched it when Willems launched it), really liking your analysis. Specially the word counting, that's pure analysis gold, and it is a great insight on how the script of the video is constructed, why the video isn't boring, and how it hovers around different topics.

Game Maker's Toolkit

Oh sorry, I’m just jealous that he pretty much nailed it on his first try :P

I'm not sure if I missed it, but it didn't seem like you explained what made you unreasonably angry about his first video. You just say that it did and that the reason is that it's great, but then dive straight into the critique without elaborating any further. It was a strong statement, so I found it weird that it went nowhere. Could you explain why the video being great made you unreasonably angry?

Alex

Marky is a fan of Patrick, neat.

Game Maker's Toolkit

That'd be cool :)

This is great. Patrick's a friend of mine, is it cool if I share this with him?

Rich Stoehr

Really interesting! I hadn't heard of him either, but I do like how he makes his points and illustrates them clearly and concisely. Importantly, he establishes his bona fides as well, showing that he knows what he's talking about both from a film fan and comic fan perspective. Good stuff!

Dave

I discovered Patrick a couple months back. I really enjoyed this video essay. I also think it's great that you're dissecting a peer to try and improve your own work. I sometimes watch how often other videogame essayists cut and how well the footage aligns with their points (and how well their points are made). If you ever wanted to give me some feedback on my videos, I'd love that. I definitely would love to see more of this. It's interesting and I think it's helping you to be better. All the best!

SmugRainbowPony

I didn't know that guy! Thank you :D I agree with you on using more side-by-side examples or other on-screen comparisons.


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