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English? Bad Hombre?
🕑 Added 2018-06-24 23:57:24 +0000 UTC Are you satisfied with the translated texts in English? Or do you feel we need to write them with more formality?Suggestions are Welcomed.
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MMV-DeepBride
The problem was the time, everything included the animation I did it in a month. That's why I did not have time to review the translation. Now I've had more time and I'm sure it's better, but I'll know it until they've tried it. XD
shlong69er
I voted yes as I feel it's formal enough, but there is quite a bit of room for improvement in term of grammar and syntax.
Naraku-no-Hana
I am voting that I'm satisfied, but that's not to say it can't use some work still. It's rough in spots and once in a while it doesn't quite convey the correct meaning. However, I can understand what was intended (sometimes after a slight pause to think about it), and I am not bothered by minor mistakes.
