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Blue Star Enterprises Chapter 2-4

🕑 Added 2024-08-09 12:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Sid_Cypher

Ah, a pet robot Dog, reminds me of Alyx's in Half-Life 2. And a starter ship for a teen right away, what a dream, huh. No kid I know (or kid I've been) had it this good, haha.

IdolTrust

I wonder if we going to have a time skip in the future after the planet gets it engine deport up and running.

melchi

I only saw it as puppy love

melchi

I was expecting plans for a ship might come from modifications of design stealing software and doing some reverse IP theft. Trying to best 5 generations back without the learnings that went into the latest models seems impossible.

Shmooggie

TYFTC! Also happy birthday Markus.

Osamaru Ta

It totally depends on the general culture. While, we, in a modern western society feel it might be a bit strange, that might not be the case somewhere else. More so in rougher, "harder" place like this (or the station where they were raised). The author's done well in establishing the kids as actual kids, but its also obvious they're rather mature for their age as well (compared to what we might be used to). That said, Markus' affection is definitely more on the "protective brother" side of things, currently, but I wouldn't totally dismiss idea that could grow to be more in a few years, despite their age.

Jeremy Macdonald

I had a lot of fun writing this chapter and coming up with the gift and reward Alex might give Markus. Let me know what you think of the chapter.--------------------------------------------- Hello from Surbris.... I've got to ask the question I see. Alex. as https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0102057/ If I had to make a guess. there's gonna be at least two more major battles And one of them is STO, getting their **** handed to them on a silver platter. But in doing so, they're gonna get that special ship or a snapshot from a type of camera allowing Alex to understand just enough to make his next model of his ship not just 10 times better, but on a different type of plane of dimensional existence. Julia will now have a guardian the way you've written this. You have basically got the lost boys in ships guarding Wendy and Peter Pan making the Magic. What the hell are you doing? Because I can't wait for the next episode of this book. Please keep going. Thank you.

Ant1h3ld

Alex' conclusion/suspicion that Markus has a crush seems a bit far-fetched. Yulia is ~10 and no 14yo boy would look at her in anything but a brotherly manner me thinks.


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