Patrefans
M.J. Markgraf from patreon
M.J. Markgraf patreon

Blue Star Enterprises Chapter 2-56

🕑 Added 2024-11-12 13:00:14 +0000 UTC

Comments

Silver Beard

Dalton got off too easily, surely, he had more that could have been taken from him.

mmarkgraf212

And allow other bounty hunters or assassins to hone in on his job? Doesn't sound like something Dalton would do, but Harlow's smart enough to figure it out even without the man. Lotta loose lips after Char's failed attack.

DaftWully

Did Dalton notify Harlow of his suspicions of where Alex was located? I can't remember, and I'm too lazy to look it up.

Nexis

The Dalton chapters were much better than expected. I liked the nice contrast to the stuff that happens normally around the MC. Realy nice done and perfect length.

mmarkgraf212

Just wait until my next trick :)

Aclys

Is it just me or did Alexander miss a glorious opportunity to go "Well, now that you have been disarmed, who hired you?" ?

Aclys

Transdimensional arm ripping abilities confirmed!

Aclys

I mean, no I do not think Harlow deserves that... unless you mean rest in pieces ^^;

Aclys

In his other pants, obviously. ^^; But yeah, you made Dalton almost easier to hate than his employer, Harlow. so not surprised plenty of people where hoping for a fate worse than death. Though honestly getting spaced feels pretty fitting on that front.

SkyGold

Great chapter! I like that he broke his arms so he couldn't take off his helmet, ensuring a slower death. Engineer's problem solving!

Shmooggie

WOOOOO

mmarkgraf212

Whoops, fixed.

mmarkgraf212

I'm not sure where you think Alexander is hiding that sort of technology.

Liam

Thank you for the story, but they tell the truth I was hoping, that Alexander what turn Dalton into a servitor with his conscious unable to control his body turning into I don't have a mouth but I must scream kind of situation.

Merlin's Fan

Satisfying, thank you

Danielle Warvel

Justice is served.

Cloud33

Touché :D Good chapter!

Mert Keskin

Nice doctor who reference

Zachary Patterson

Thank you for the chapter!

Sad Potato

Off to the void with you! YEEET!

Azulmar

Demons run when a good man goes to war. RIP Harlow.

314resqi

"Harlow’s other arm" - wrong dude


More Creators