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BSE Chapter 5-59

🕑 Added 2025-08-14 12:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Darkhelm

I struggle with kidnapping themed arcs. They are so disruptive to the story, have a type of tension that I personally do not enjoy, and usually last entirely too long. I hope that is not the case here as this is one of my favorite stories.

Nexis

Every story at one point comes to an end. This stil is only the end of the 5. arc, but there will be a time this story will truly end. The most importened thing for us readers is that when that happens, we lean back with only one thouth in our mind. WOW, what a ride. I am not able to write you with a personal message so I will do it this way. With this story you are practicly an expert in realistic sience fiction and so I thought I should try to seed another story idea in your mind where you would be able to use that knowlage of theoretical possible tech you worked so hard to get. I only could find 3 storys that are similar, and none of them are realy good written or have that much chapters. So I thought i could plant the idea of a similar story into your mind, where the MC gains awareness as an ship AI, with maybe controlling nanites. The very interesting parts are building and advancing the ship, human and alien crew gathering, observing the social interaction between those in the ship this AI awareness inhabitants. Possible time scips while traveling throuth space for hundreds of years, or by accidently getting to close to a black hole. Maybe later visiting planets with some kind of avatar or robot that also could advance as he/she could interact with his passengers. I know this is a very egoistic idea from my side, but it could also be a nice idea to play around for a realy good Autor that already has realistic sience fiction knowlage. Of course only after the next 10 arcs of BSE.


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