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BSE Chapter 3-4.5

🕑 Added 2024-12-22 16:28:14 +0000 UTC

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mmarkgraf212

There was, but it only worked if I took the comma out after that.

Shmooggie

I’m no English major but I feel like there’s a comma missing: “As much as he loved his wife after she birthed Charlie,”. After wife.

Avdrdr

Well, I think he’s waiting for them to hang themselves by giving enough rope. There is no way the seeds were left unguarded or monitored.

Gabriel Melnik

In my opinion a firing squad should have been this guy's punishment. Not like being dropped in the sulfuric desert isn't a death sentence itself, but it's more clean and final. The banishment allows for these characters to be reoccurring, but they don't work as a compelling villain, making it annoying if they were reintroduced.

Liam

Thank you for the update and please take your time.


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