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BSE Chapter 4-33

🕑 Added 2025-03-07 13:00:15 +0000 UTC

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Zachary Patterson

Thank you for the chapter!

mmarkgraf212

Some of that stuff will get covered after Alexander leaves for his trip.

Vlast

I will be throwing a lot of words, but that's just me bumbling about. First of all, I really like the series, great work keeping it entertaining. But here's a few thing that kept on my mind after reread: - I genuinely missed the sentence(it was just mentioned in passing) in which the council of Eden's End was switched, partly due to new members without names, but mostly due to no planet-based decisions being done in the last book and a half (not counting academy). - Similarly I'm confused at what exactly is happening on planetside, it seems there is more than 10000+ inhabitants, yet only one active bar? I guess the populace are closer to Amish then I imagined. - While introducing the pharmaceutical companies is a very good direction for the colony and perhaps later we would see more additions (maybe computonics, agriculture, gotta collect them all) there is 0 information about them. One of the companies have a new rad-away product, cool, maybe sell some to Asgard to help populace after Harlow nuked that city? The other one has some "improvements" but are they better or worse than Alex is currently buying from STO? Does it solve the problems of having medicine on hand to save survivors from battle if another one occurs and stock the battleships? Remembering the super-medkit from earlier chapters, maybe Alex can contribute with some engineering solution for delivery system, or simply provide computonics/manufacturing to expand their production? And considering that those companies are independent what about their desire to sell product when they have surplus, otherwise Alex is their only customer? - It seems even after 8 months there doesn't seem to have any trading between Asgard, save for some deliveries(whatever that means) to Char and other Jarl. Maybe it's worth to sell/share some thruster/engine schematics to them so that they can start producing their own. Doesn't look like Eden's End has capacity to supply entirety of Asgard with the newer stuff. - Pembroke seems to have a wagon of work and no underlings. - I have no idea of relative purchasing power of money. If 10mil is enough to hire Dalton that is just 3 thrusters, or one super-medkit from Petrov? Eeh, wall of text, but I'm happy for more. Also it seems like new weapon is perfect for bolt action rifle or sniper equivalent.


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