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BSE Chapter 4-40

🕑 Added 2025-03-18 12:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Zachary Patterson

Thank you for the chapter!

CourtesyFlush

Good catch, I didn't even notice the second one. I think 'They were nearly finished though.' would roll off the tongue better.

Julian1701

Thanks for the nice chapter, as usual. i did find some mistakes, that you may want to change: -At best, the man would kill himself to project the Lokis -> At best, the man would kill himself to protect the Lokis -They were nearly complete though. -> They were nearly done though.


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