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BSE Chapter 5-39

🕑 Added 2025-07-10 12:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Lolan

"The problem was, once the missiles lit off their engines, they could go dark again, making their trajectory nearly impossible to predict." - This is wrong, it's simple math to figure out a path for a missile going in a straight line.

Vlast

If I were to have a small complaint it is centered around the amount of ships present, I will try to form a proper argument but I also fear I might not succeed. In a simple way I feel the fleet composition need to matter more, somehow my brain can't square the circle when the story mentions, let's say BSE has a fleet of 80. While 1 ship = 1 ship, 1 gunship != 1 frigate. Char and Krieger clearly think that their forces are capable to go against 1000+ fleet of Xin but the reader is missing most of the information, outside of Xin ships using outdated technology. It is sorta-but-not-really implied that during the battle the stealth corvettes will be targeting the capital ships exclusively, therefore removing most dangerous targets and making the fight much easier on the Union fleet. Adding in the advantageous fleet position it is possible to overcome the numerical discrepancy, yet at the same time it just feels like "Union fleet cannot die completely due to plot armor". Eeeh, that's not exactly right, how about this - "during the Harlow battle we were fighting 2 to 1 odds and barely got out alive, here we have 8 to 1 odds, no big deal, just Tuesday". That is also not going over the fact that majority of Union fleet is also kinda outdated compared to STO (I'm basing this on the fact that original Katalynn fleet had outdated engines). This might be entirely due to inflated number of enemies, quite honestly the initial assessment of 800 enemy ships by Krieger is already a terrifying prospect to fight. We're not finished and maybe even halfway there and already about 1500+ destroyed. I don't even want to think how the main Shican forces are going to be in tens of thousands. While BSE can only produce 2-3 frigates every 2-3 months. The Harlow fight felt personal, the Xin just feels like a EveOnline spreadsheet even if we have a PoV of Ylva and her struggle.


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