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BSE Chapter 5-41

🕑 Added 2025-07-14 12:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Vlast

A few observations: 1. 4 cruisers, fox and swordfish scout is 6 ships. 2. I think the second to last paragraph needs a little bit of editing to properly highlight the failure of the first and second rocket to reach the target. Also it will be funny if the 4th rocket is still armed and tumbling in the Xin space prepared to collide with unsuspected vessel.

Silver Beard

I didn't mean to say that the story isn't always moving forward; only that a lot of chapters feel like they're preparation or slowly building up. And then there are ones that like this where tangible progress is made. Now Kane can get back to rebuilding the fleet without worrying so much about the Shican coming in mass for half a year or more.

Silver Beard

No big cliff; tyvm! Progress is always appreciated.


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