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Edits to Kernstalion 57 and 58
🕑 Added 2022-03-07 20:24:30 +0000 UTCAs the title suggests, I've made a few major edits to Kernstalion 57 and 58. If you don't feel like reading, the changes are as follows.
- Est doesn't give the ring to Antoni
- Antoni is a little less 'dangerous' and Est is less scared
- Est fights the guard and wins easily
- Est takes a whole lot more seeds/nuts as payment for Antoni trying to trick them
- A whole lot of grammar/sentence structure fixes
These changes were made after some good feedback from Royal Road. Remember, if you guys see something you think makes no sense, let me know. I might not do something about it everytime, but I will if I think you are right :)
- John
