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Irwin's Journey chapter 158: Five

🕑 Added 2023-09-29 19:01:49 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Fixed, thanks a lot!

TWW

This time, there was no silence, but a deadly silence filled the square, even the rustling of movement gone as the smiths looked at him. Was no -> wasn’t only Not sure if that is the correct fix but sounds weird currently were on the Scour -> were on Scour Urdwellan intervenes intervenes-> intervened "Mostly likely. Mostly-> most Greldo thought she was coming to him Coming to -> coming on to She promised me to keep it to myself…. promised me-> made me promise

Carrarn

Ugh. On it!

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Heads up, there are more incorrect names than normal, you might want to give it another proofreading pass.


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