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Irwin's Journey 191: Planning a large-scale evacuation

🕑 Added 2023-11-21 21:02:59 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Fixed, thanks! Also, thanks for the explanation - the silly thing is, I know it, but somehow I so easily read over it. One of those things I guess I trained myself on by reading to many machine translated Xianxia over the years

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Caldangen was sat is -> Caldangen was is validate it -> verify it much supplies -> many supplies much is for uncountable nouns; many for countable. ie: how much sand on the beach, how much sugar in jar - the collection of sand/sugar may be measured by weight, or maybe volume, but not as individual grains. The supplies would be counted individually, not by weight or volume.

Alex

So Indoubtor is still an arrogant spoiled asshole. I never liked him.

Lommel

Last chapter or before Gelwin said Irwin would be traveling all over (prediction), and what we learned about the main branch and everything else it is only natural that he will continue to broaden his perspective. And who on earth thinks boring kingdom building described with the accuracy of a Civilization game (i.e. none whatsoever) is more interesting than exploration of a huuuuuge world of worlds???

travis pancake

Amazing chapter, loved the interaction between Irwin and everyone. I love how Irwin ways he has no desire to rule, but I really expect he is gonna get shoved into the ruler position. At least I hope so, probably with Daubutim running most of it.

Carrarn

No worries, he will :)

Carrarn

Okay, just saw that another few odd errors got through and checked them in Grammarly (the full version). There's literally a sentence there that has no dot at the end, and the rest is unfinished, but Grammarly thought it was perfectly fine. I'm not sure what's going on, but I'm starting to think that I need to move to another grammar checker. Anyway, I'll see what I can do about this, and sorry for the weird errors. I fixed them here, let me know if there's more. I'll re-read it tomorrow, but I'm somewhat word blind right now.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Hopefully Daubutim actually talks with Irwin about the leadership of the new world soon.


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