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Irwin's Journey 196: Irwin?

🕑 Added 2023-11-28 21:26:11 +0000 UTC

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TheRNGenius

Ah, almost forgot. On patreon if you swipe wrong, you close the chapter and loose track of where you were. I haaate that. Having to find your place again with all the tiny little text.

TheRNGenius

Hey Carrarn, good to now see/read you on patreon! Dont know how long i ll stay but first off i ll need to binge more irwins journey! Some personal preference for parteon chapter posts: i read practically everything on my phone and reading patreon sucks on the phone. Text is so tiny..i only endure for good books. One author i support does it really well though: inadversibly compelled..i think? (Author of Paranoid Mage, Chasing Sunlight, and a newer really good one) He attaches a .pdf and an .epub file to the patreon chapters. I can open a pdf and use de adobe acrobat liquid reader to enlare the text size for more comfortable reading. Similar to royal road. Can you check, whether that would be a major additional workload when releasing posts? Maybe and author to author talk about options is viable? I d love it, its one of the ways to make a picky reader like me stay.

Carrarn

Fixed, thanks!

A B

the portal began popping -> portals returned from that left -> returned that left were, you -> were you,

Carrarn

Don't worry, he will be with his family or nearby for the next 25 or so chapters. With a few exceptions ;)

Cinque Culver

Tyftc! You really made us wait for this reunion!

Alex

How long was he gone from his family's perspective? A bit over a year? His brother sure works fast xD then again, fantasy world birth control is always an interesting topic.

Alex

Where were, you foolish boy ... not sure how to properly fix it, commas aren't my strength, but this is wrong. Where were you foolish boy? Where were you, foolish boy? I think the first looks better? ...commas suck xD

Brandon Terry

Hopefully his brother is ready for a heart card cause that’s probably what it’s gonna take to get everyone out alive safely.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the heartwarming chapter! :-)

travis pancake

Wait just had a thought, do we know the origin of these monster things? We know they can have multiple soul cards, with that power they sound like they could be related to the ones behind the barrier.

travis pancake

I forget what it was called but the scary bird thing is back, time for round 2. Hopefully Irwin will be able to put up a better fight this time.

Carrarn

A warning, I didn't have as much time to proofread/edit this as I wanted, but it was either release it like this or make you all wait another day. I'll go through it in the morning, with fresh eyes, and pick out any mistakes I find. I had great fun writing this chapter, and I hope you all enjoy it ! :) EDIT: I just edited out a bunch of mistakes and errors from this chapter, so it should be more readable now :) If you still find something let me know and I'll fix it asap.


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