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Irwin's Journey 217: Frying pan

🕑 Added 2024-01-12 19:56:47 +0000 UTC

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molten it -> melted it can Endil -> can see Endil Galadin's -> Galadins this so that -> this, that Wel -> well hang out -> hung out

Doctor Black

Thanks for the chapter! Some edit suggestions: When the Anvin seemed content -> Anvil Irwin let out a long, weary sigh. -> Ambraz

Joao Sousa

"He was wearing nothing, but his" -> I think the comma shouldn't be here. And a bit bellow this it should probably be "goal" and not "goat" "Of course, you do," same thing here with the first comma. English is not my primary language though so it's is very possible I'm wrong 😅 "You can Endil for the details" possibly "ask" missing here? "said as he stared" -> she stared


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