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Irwin's Journey 221: The Shadows of Dimarintsia

🕑 Added 2024-01-20 17:59:58 +0000 UTC

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titbit. If you in any way let split -> tidbit. If you in any way let spill dislodge -> disclose requires to be here -> requires being here

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didn't want to stay -> didn't want to say

Carrarn

No, you're definitely misreading this time. Any lines in particular that give you this idea? I don't mind changing it around a bit because that's not the gist of what's going to happen :) Senira is truely just there to get the eggs.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! That said, it really looks like Senira is withholding important information that the ignorance of may get her killed? I hope not, since failure to communicate obviously important to know things in order to force plot points is weirdly frustrating for the reader (or maybe just me?). Hopefully I'm misreading that; regardless, really enjoyed this chapter! :-)


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