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Irwin's Journey 412: Long overdue reunions

🕑 Added 2025-04-18 16:29:20 +0000 UTC

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Dungeonborn

Scintilla was looking back, a smile on her face as she put the other three children on the ground. -> previously you described her as holding 2 and 4 standing around.

Antony Claughton

How old is Daubautim’s daughter with the bow? Surely it can only be 12-13? Seems a little oddly written. Or were they born before the last time Irwin returned?

Antony Claughton

Given how many ports were devastated, that would impact the Yuurindi too. However, you would think if that was the case the matriarch would have warned Irwin. From what was written they should have had knowledge of dozens of worlds before they got there.

Antony Claughton

that place is going to be a busy place ==> that place is going to be busy Now, why don't you introduce me to your brothers ==> and sisters? to your family? Seems odd to exclude Scintilla and the daughters. Guards stood around the world ==> Guards stood around the world portal She'd wondered how she was going to find Irwin, but as her gaze headed to the wall. A deep voice boomed from a group of people in the center of the hall, and she saw a head poke out from its midst. ==> She'd wondered how she was going to find Irwin, but a deep voice boomed from the group of people in the center of the hall and she saw a head poke out from its midst. All of them began shouting in unison, but for one, Esmee didn't hear them. ==> All of them began shouting in unison, but for once Esmee didn't hear them.

Robert Reilly

👏👏👏

AngeTrap

Vraiment désolé de toujours commenter en français 😓 mais je ne suis pas très bon en anglais. J'ai adoré ce chapitre merci Carrarn, en ce concerne les pov j'aimerais avoir le point de vue des gens à côté de la mine où Irwin a placé le morceau de métal magique

Blackaquaman25

We love it

Albert Benny Oliyakkattil

Tftc. Happy Good Friday!

Eric M

I’m curious what the concern was with Irwin taking over the academy. Also, I thought there would be more Yuurindi, 5k doesn’t seem like much, they must have dumped a ton of them in the other world.

Carrarn

Hahaha, ow dear - sorry, changed it :D

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! It was nice:-)

Govir Drauka

So many cocks, for the handful of ships they had? -> this story took a turn… ;) — She also recognized the bald, onyx-skinned, loud man, Yogog, whose eyes were wrapped with pale cloth. -> is that his name?

Steven Thompsen

Atleast we know what your thinking about. ;) She barely noticed the incredible growth that the harbor had gone through, going from a single enormous tree filled with buildings to dozens, their canopies interlocked, and the enormous docks attached to the central one. At another time, she'd have snorted at it. So many "cocks", for the handful of ships they had? Did they seriously think Irwin would bring a fleet along?

Rielgesh

Tftc! I would love to see some profession growth from the kids if they're old enough for it now, like are any of them as good as Irwin at smithing? Resonance? Better than Irwin was? Definitely need Trimdir's and the others reactions to Irwin's soulscape and card creation method. Possibly something with someone slotting purified types on a card or up to a heartcard?

Fan Verse

Thank you for the chapter!!I have never clicked on a notification so fast!! I’m loving this blend of past and present, reading the thoughts and emotions of others we have seen in while great; I’m hoping we get more like this cause it’s great for story depth and helps tie up ends.

Ansh Khean

Love it, and I want moar!!!!!!

Adunn

Nice chapter. I really hope they aren’t gone for years and years again. I’m kind if surprised his mom didn’t decide to live on the outside of the portal for times sake.

Carrarn

Tried to follow the requested viewpoints ;) Sadly, as always happens, it took far more words to get this over in justice, while adding the missing moment with Irwin's mother and her new grandchildren. The next chapter will show some of what is happening through the eyes of another set of requested POV - It should, hopefully, end with a sort of start of a new normal. After that we are going to have a couple or more chapters that start building to the future. I'll probably slow that down a bit, so we wont be having a lot of fighting or similar, except for perhaps some skirmshes for the next dozen or so chapters. If there's something else you really wanna see, leave it below. If it fits, and I can imagine it I'll see what I can do :) Make sure to take the offer now, because after we exit this part of the story we are going balls deep again and I'll have little chance to add other stuff :P


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