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Irwin's Journey 451: A third party?

🕑 Added 2025-07-18 17:02:40 +0000 UTC

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Antony Claughton

her deviance come ==> her defiance come One was the man with the Source Flame, the other was the woman beside him ==> you’d already written that he’d stood up. When he told Irwin her name was failure.

Wurschtelpotz

There is a HUGE gaping hole in Irwin's threat. If they attack and manage to KILL the empress, Irwin's threat to take the side of the attacked party becomes utterly useless, given the demise of said party.


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