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Irwin's Journey 224: Guest

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 20:23:51 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Thanks for the kind words, and for becoming a patron! Most of the story is from Irwin's perspective, with only a few snippets in between. It will stay like that because one of things I like least while reading is when the main character gets the backseat for a dozen chapters or more. :)

Chaz Baz

Chazbaz from Royal Road here. Again and again I've noticed this fact. The author has crafted a truly interesting and somewhat brutal universe here. I'm really enjoying the journey. As long as it's mostly from Irwins perspective. 😎.

A B

added amount of energy -> increase in energy

Joao Sousa

"you know I can" -> think it should be "can't" instead from the following conversation. "You did someone" -> "you did something", "You have this is going" -> maybe remove 'you have'? Or change it to 'that you have this'? "He will if he can't hold out!" -> he will if he can hold out!

Stephen Pearson

Another great chapter, thanks! :-)


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