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Irwin's Journey 242: Proadon

🕑 Added 2024-03-09 18:43:55 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Totally agree in hindsight. Changed it and good call !

TheRNGenius

Thanks for the chapter, as always i enjoy reading. This chapters title is pretty spoilery..the pissed off guard chief sends that dude off to proadon 3 in the middle of the chapter. If i had read the title previously i would ve known immediately, that irwins crew was somehow smart enough not to head there, taking that small bit of tension and world building away.. Maybe reduce it to just Proadon or something?

A B

"So far -> So far " Do -> "Do advice… -> advise...

Carrarn

He has a soulcard, its a full armor one. Did I say here he doesn't? If so, thats a mistake. Let me check what I messed up ;)

Lommel

Wait - are you sure Boohm doesn't have any soulcard yet? I don't really remember, but I always thought he did. He does not have a heartcard ATM or we would have heard/read about his eyes, and as a mercenary in the outer reaches, with not even a heartcard, is that even possible? I thought he was kind of strong, only that he didn't have a card in his set for the freezing temperatures?

Carrarn

Thanks, fixed! :)

Doctor Black

Thanks! What do you think of my few modifications? -> should be new? You'gym -> You’gyn

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Carrarn

Last stop before Granvox ;) (Atleast the last one that will have any details beyond - gone there, got cards) A tiny chance tomorrow's chapter will be arriving on Tuesday due to editing getting in the way. Depends on how well I do the rest of night. Wish me luck! :)


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