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Irwin's Journey cover poll!

🕑 Added 2024-03-26 21:50:25 +0000 UTC

Comments

Eric M

Red, but the anvil should be Am'braz, that doesn't look like what I pictured. Where is his hammer? And what is his left hand doing? Is he flexing and forging at the same time? If you are going to do something with the left, have it wreathed in flame perhaps, so not just showing the forging, but the use of his primary skill...

yunus emre gokal

teal but the background of the text should be changed

edward hannigan

No. It doesn't look anything like how I imagine Irwin's Journey to look, Not only because he looks too old for book 1 or because it doesn't look like smithing but because book one is set in the different shard worlds not a smithy even then putting Irwin on the cover will work but I prefer the card. Now these are just my feelings on the matter but the first book is about his first card, the second his Smithing, and the third the Shattering. you see where I'm going with this it's just not what the stories are about of course you could do it you could probably get away with it but it doesn't help tell your story.