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Irwin's Journey 250: Golden Friction Academy

🕑 Added 2024-03-29 20:06:19 +0000 UTC

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Antony Claughton

“say ones more” once

Raymond Cootware

You wrote "This one had water and ripple type, which is probably why it's so expensive" then explained why that was potentially a problem ( although I didn't really understand, it sounded like it would make things better to me) and finished with that's probably why it wasn't more expensive which just leaves me confused about whether it's driving the price up or down.

Carrarn

Wups, thats what I get for editing two different stories so close together. Fixed it. Normally, I do the Pokemon story during the week, but work was a bit of a thing, so it all came down to Friday. I'll try and keep a better eye on it :) My son had a blast when I called Orion Irwin twice last week ;)

Flusspferd

What he said.

TWW

The last and third to last paragraphs say “Orion” rather than Irwin.

TWW

For me I guess it depends what they are about. If he goes along just takes classes and makes friends and then leaves at the end of the arc and none of it matters anymore, I would say short. If he advances his smithing, powers up, crafts cards for his friends, foils someone’s plans, helps ambraz advance, learns about the enemies of the his people or the smith snatchers, and finds people to bring back to his world or mercenary crew, more chapters could be nice.


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