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Irwin's Journey 283: Long ears

🕑 Added 2024-06-15 19:14:10 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Fixed, that one. Also, I'm not sure why I've been letting so many errors slip over the last few weeks. I was pretty sick for a bit, but I didn't have the feeling it affected my writing. Also didn't change the tooling I use, but the quality seems to have dropped. Perhaps I've been relying too much on Google Docs, Grammar Check, and Grammarly. I wish I had more time to proofread my own chapters, but that will have to wait till my vacation. This reminds me: I need to post a message for mid-august. I've managed to keep the chapters flowing during most of my holidays, even when I was gone, but there's going to be one in August, which will require my full attention, making that largely impossible. >makes mental note while writing down ramblings<

Stephen Pearson

Great chapter with lots and lots of typos:-) Including in your blurb, I just noticed: 'The young, sickly boy Irwin has seen nothing but bad luck in his short [live -> life].' Another that I remember and don't see in Lommel's post is tomb (where you put bodies) -> tome (where you put words).

Lommel

> He was ejected out of the shadow realm, and Daubutim briskly walked forward, grabbing what looked like a pack before he started stuffing things in. *Greldo > I've got tent ready, just in case. *a tent > Definitely has to go back to get a few more cards for a few tests *have to -- assuming he's talking about himself here > he looked wandered up the tower, (change something) > which gave a reasonable few of the area, *view > a large two-eared creature "two-eared", sounds rare... /s :-) Also, we didn't see or hear anything of Coal in this chapter, that's strange... especially now that multiple versions of him could spread out and survey the surroundings.


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