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Irwin's Journey 321: Circling the dead

🕑 Added 2024-09-14 20:09:58 +0000 UTC

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NaniJC

Kaiju: Battlefield Smith.

Noblessejav

LOL they really do find themselves exploring corpses alot

Antony Claughton

bue ==> blue

Nicholas Del Rossi

Like the addition, the absence of any comment on there future was making me think meta thoughts like, maybe Arwin will sing to them and they will follow him without any intention his part, or they will sit by the portal till something happens, or something /someone will attack them soon, or they will end up talking to one another due to curiosity, fear or an emanating threat etc, any number of things that would turn current speculation into potentially unnecessary foreshadowing or a red hearings even if it would fit with the characters morals and feelings towards the whales and baby creatures.

Carrarn

Read the comments and my replies up - i made a few changes ;)

Carrarn

K, was working on the next chapter and this thing wouldn't stop bugging my brain so I added something before continuing :P There's some added and changed stuff at the point where they find the chaos whales.

Carrarn

That's a good point actually. I got sidetracked by the addled, but you are absolutely correct. I'll try and find some time after I'm done with todays chapter to add a bit of that in this one.

Leander

Good chapter, only issue i had is that they ignored the baby whales and didn‘t show even a hint of empathy towards them.

Nicholas Del Rossi

Yes!

Cal

He had better take them back to Eleuthera where the big whale was

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Nicholas Del Rossi

The cliff is hanging, good chapter but what are they going to do about the baby chaos whales? On there list of things to do it seems like they plan on leaving them there, we can’t abounding the baby’s!


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