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Irwin's Journey 345: Heartskil

🕑 Added 2024-11-09 20:22:56 +0000 UTC

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Moses

Didn’t the last chaos whale card become a massive liability ? Not sure why they aren’t more worried about it.

Nicholas Del Rossi

I’d want to see more of the unchaining and Arwen‘s process in doing so what he learns from doing it multiple times and what he learns about their tribe and people as he’s on their world how much time you put into that depends on the specifics of writing it I suppose But personally, I wouldn’t mind more even if it kept us from moving the rest of the plot forward. This is one of those pieces that I read for so skipping it or pieces of it wouldn’t sit as well for me.

Drumic

It would be interesting to see if removing the chains from a bound that is at or approaching the point where they feel pain and compelled to return to a guidar has notable differences to the removal we just saw.

Ahmed Mendil

Feel free to skip if there's nothing new. I'll better read what they'll don with their spoils

Richard Brown

I agree, please just skim over all the unchaining

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-) To your question, the way you normally handle these things works well (that is, a few interesting situations and individuals while glossing over the redundant bits).

Carrarn

Next chapter will most likely be next Friday - I'm thinking of not going into to much details about Irwin's unchaining of Lajijja's tribe. Do you agree, or would you prefer more time dedicated to it?


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