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Irwin's Journey 347: Hammering out a snack

🕑 Added 2024-11-16 21:09:10 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Fixed, thanks for pointing it out! Just to explain, there was a bug in Patreon for a while that meant if I edited something, I had to reselect the collection, or it would remove it. Before I realized this had happened. If you notice any more, please let me know!

WarriorDick

@carrarn This chapter is missing in the collection. Had to come to the posts to find it. FYI

Carrarn

I'm sorry to hear that- Does it help if I say that I agree with your distaste of both slavery arcs and mind control? Well, unless those are the start of the story and after that are the backdrop of the rest. About uncontrollable emotions - I (clearly) don't have as much of a problem with them, but I'll take your feedback seriously. The resolution of this is tied to something else, which might take another few chapters, but I'll try to make sure not to add any non-essential story plotlines in between. Edit: This is based on the newest chapter - not the one this comment is below btw.

returner

The loss of Irwin's agency because of the titan card is really killing my enjoyment of the story. Easily one of the number one motives novels get dropped. Slavery arcs, mind control, uncontrollable rage and dark passengers. I really hope they solve it quickly. I hate it

Antony Claughton

True. But even if he’s dead, his business may still exist. And my memory is there were severe repercussions for breaching a contract. Maybe Irwin can buy the business! 😼

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Eric M

That's assuming the guy is even still alive. He was one of the smiths forcefully relocated to a "safe" world, and many of those worlds were later raided by the Guidar's mercs.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Antony Claughton

Potentially he could buy that out at some stage, if his first boss doesn’t realise what he’d be losing.

Antony Claughton

Interesting he mentioned the soul shards he has, it’s been a while. One other issue with registering is he technically owes his first boss 10 years of work for sending him to the time-dilated planet. Presumably registering would trigger that again.


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