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Irwin's Journey 370: Into the encroaching storm

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 20:50:32 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Theres 2 chokepoints toward the central branches. Suderfuix is thebother

Mariusz Klimczak

So, Lady Mallada is leaving with Irwin & company for Suiderfuix in hope of finding a marchant bound for Tweelak branch. Does it mean that Dismarintsia isn't the single choke point between Langost branch and cental branches as most locals seem to believe?

Noblessejav

It is nice to catch up with Daubutim and the gang after a bit. But man I am blanking on some of the names,, I need to reread

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Carrarn

Don't worry, your good intentions were clear and are clear :) Also, you and Maurice are right. It would be stupid, and I'm trying to show Gloom as anything, but - we will see how you like the solution :)

Albert Benny Oliyakkattil

Tftc!

Venson Mascarenhas

Yeah you're right. Now I understand why that personal space mentioned.

Nicholas Del Rossi

This I think. Passive: Massively increased control over the shadowrealm [increased within personal space]

Nicholas Del Rossi

I think its effect was rolled into other aspects of the card including the personal space it keeps mentioning.

Maurice Jenter

Well, I do agree with you, Gloom is not stupid and it would be stupid if he wouldn't tell Greldo about it. But I guess the topic is a perfect intruduction for the lessons about control:)

Venson Mascarenhas

Was Irwin not forging a handcard rather than a heart card for Greldo. I thought this was Greldo's 6th hand card. If it's a heart card what happened to the ability bring objects into shadow realm. It was not in the description.

Nicholas Del Rossi

"If you are to join for the trip, that means you are going to follow my orders," Irwin said, taking a step back and looking around. He nodded at Greldo, who rolled his eyes but stepped up beside him. "That counts for all of you. Starting now, I'm Captain or Captain Irwin until we reach Suiderfuix. You will follow my orders, and everyone will carry that weight. Understood Irwin is no longer going by Rodd, but is he going by his real name now or did that slip in? Was looking forward to a new nickname, maybe nick, or Jon Smith. . . Wait ok maybe not Jon smith.

Nicholas Del Rossi

Looking forward to all the plots unfolding, we got so many at this point, from the new home world to character plots, peeping for the invasion whatever Galwin is up to, the however many peoples we have met, the central‘s reaction to the invasion is however far off but getting closer, or not it might be Irwin going to meet them sometime later, or a mix of both, the new info about the shadow world, the ganvils, the smiths being kidnapped, the crew that escaped on the ship before Irwin arrived, the plot line of me ever remember how to spell anyone’s name other then Irwin and Greldo, oh and Ambroze,

Nicholas Del Rossi

Wonder if gloom is going to tell Greldo as planned or keep putting it off, hope he tells him or gives a good reason not to, felt a bit like it was going down the idiot plot, note idiot plots are where characters act like idiots or the plot dose not work, and not telling Greldo about the mental compulsion seems like a recipe for disaster and misunderstandings, luckily gloom seems to see this, so hopefully we either get that conversation or a good reason for its absence, I hate using the word idiot even in reference to a trope sense it is prone to misunderstanding so this is here to clarify that I am 100% talking about the trope and not the writing or writer. While I don’t tend to like the trope in serious story’s if we are going in that direction I am still not insulting anyone or thing, always get stressed when writing in fear of misunderstandings like that.

Antony Claughton

awarded ==> warded

Nicholas Del Rossi

Well this could end in many differing ways.


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