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Irwin's Journey 371: Under pressure

🕑 Added 2025-01-12 20:17:17 +0000 UTC

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Sean T

Irwin gains new family members left and right. First a bunch of kids now potentially a sister. Is the power of family going to be a thing soon lol.

Maurice Jenter

Daubutim has an ruby heartcard, right?

Nicholas Del Rossi

Greldo can no longer be sneaky around shadow walkers, they won’t find him but they will know something is out there, or maybe they will find him, maybe his shadow has become to loud.

Antony Claughton

I've also got to say I'm REALLY looking forward to when some of the enemy shadewalkers encounter Greldo, and if possible us seeing them reporting back to their commanders! Should be hilarious. Commander: what do you mean there are fish in the shadows? And where are Jenni and Roger? Shadwalker: well um, they started bowing and scraping to this guy ... Commander: what! Although it may crimp Greldo's style for spying where there are shadewalkers. "Um sir, did you notice we just got a swamp around us???"

Antony Claughton

Really interesting. I hope on Suiderfuix they reunite with Rindari and then can head home for a bit. Seeing how the other smiths react to his skill is going to be fascinating though!

Albert Benny Oliyakkattil

Tftc!

Nicholas Del Rossi

You awoke my childhood nostalgia with one typo,

Nicholas Del Rossi

Great chapter it felt like taking a precise step in for directions only to somehow land with solid footing, I am wondering if anyone actually died in the conflict between the world and the enslaved peoples, whose species I forget the name of, It didn’t sound like anyone was killed in the initial conflict, but when the shadow scouts fought or rather were ambushed by them she talk both about them, trying to take the shadows scouts alive, and two of them being done in immediately some clarity and whether or not they were killed or incapacitated instantly might be needed for that part otherwise flawless chapter love the characters love the world building loved the writing my only problem is that I have to wait four days for the next chapter. By the way, one of the scouts has an N in the name and as a player of the game, tf2 I nearly laughed, my pants off when I realized it was a typo. As scounts, is a common insult in that game to scout players, usually sarcastically to a friend who’s a scout main or as an expletive to a scout who is kicking your butt, or utilizing what some people might consider cheap tactics, although sometimes also more derogatory fortunately TFT, or at least none of the Youtubers and players to the servers I play on, tend to be toxic or bigoted very often.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)


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