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Irwin's Journey 375: Like a tree?

🕑 Added 2025-01-24 19:40:07 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

You are completely correct - I should have waited with yesterdays release due to my migraine and reread it. I mixed up Montain, Esther, and Seleen, who were those smiths Irwin took along together with Dahlia. Thanks for pointing it out - I'll fix it later today, changing it. Something did happen to Skylar, but I somehow managed to mix up two minor storylines. Will be fixed asap!

TL

Thanks for the chapter, i‘ve enjoyed it! (Hope you get better soon!)

Govir Drauka

Joulighn -> Joulihn — from your say there -> from your stay there

luxrus

Nothing happened :(

Antony Claughton

Actually, I think I realise what it is. The smiths Rindiri rescued would have been debriefed. If they heard while being tortured/used that Lasther was searching for Irwin that would explain why the guild mistress has looked him up. They may also know other things Lasther mentioned about himself, his race, his intentions, etc. Of course, the vice-guild mistress should know how other places are struggling for food as Rindiri would have been debriefed.

Antony Claughton

Long time since Tensor or the 10yr deal has been considered. You would expect given how they use crystals that the head guild would have records on everyone. What is less clear is why the guild master knows this about him straight off her head, when they only confirmed who he was a few hours ago on the docks.

Antony Claughton

Carsmith's ==> Cardsmith’s atleast ==> at least. (Occurs several times) as her form slowly grew two heads ==> can be read as growing two separate heads. Maybe “as her form slowly grew two heads lengths”? like hot ==> likely hot as bent under ==> as bend under your say there. ==> your stay there.

Eric M

I thought Skylar was in his band, and not one who joined them on Eluathar. Although, the info about Clearsky and Aurella rings a bell, think that was his mentor who got him into Granvox academy.

Nicholas Del Rossi

Good chapter. having trouble keeping track of people. Irwin has so many people in his soul scape traveling with them. The names are starting to throw me off. More and more, Could be that I’m just not used to reading stories serialized with this many characters, but I keep having to pause whenever someone is introduced with only their name, I can’t even remember how many new characters have been introduced over the last 20 or so chapters, many of whom while notable haven’t been fully connected to their names yet in my head, I can remember who they are, but not by using their name it isn’t until something about them is mentioned that I can make the connection to who is who.

Stephen Pearson

How you feel better soon, and thanks for the chapter! :-)

Carrarn

Bit shorter than I had planned but a migraine attack threw a wrench in my writing day - still, I hope you enjoy :)


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