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Irwin's Journey 385: Will it fit?

🕑 Added 2025-02-15 19:32:18 +0000 UTC

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Carrarn

Hey there, thanks for becoming a patron - just so you know, you don't have to talk about me in the third person like that on here. If you think I've made a mistake or could so something better, just tell me and let me know what you feel should have been different. Trying to understand what you mean - what is making Irwin seem naive? Also, what kind of card should he have created? Just for reference, Greldo is currently still building his heartcard so he can't slot another card right now.

Moses

You’d think after all the tracking and secrecy he’s been through Irwin would be on the look out for such things but no the author keeps making him seem naive. He should have atleast created a card for that type of situations if he’s serious then we’d see if terlo is OP or something but know it just seems like negligence on Irwin’s part.

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I would like to see Terlo dying. Violently.

Josh McDonnell

True but. I am talking about lumbtum ( spelled wong I know) his friend who is in command of their planet

Shiva Kumar

It was advised by the wise guy to not visit any library as his identity was burned.

Albert Benny Oliyakkattil

Tftc!

Sean T

Hope they can keep their home world a secret 😔 would be a bummer if Terlo manages to sneak back with them kind of easily. All that precaution and effort goes poof just like that.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Josh McDonnell

Did Irwin remember to pick up the thousands of books he was asked to bring back? If he forgets again his friend will be mad. All his friend wants to do is relax and read a good book and Irwin keeps forgetting.

Adunn

Terlo is gonna learn all their secrets. They better find a way to earn his undying loyalty or they are screwed.

Nicholas Del Rossi

i'd also love to see some forging and maybe other Smith's and ganvil's . . .is it rude to say smith's and ganvils instead of just smith's? do Ganvils Consider them self's smith's? well id love to see them learning reacting and working on there own study's if you had anything there you thought might be cool to read about, also to hear about there planes for the next card Irwin is planning on for his forth slot, but that might be ok to wait on till we get closer to it, it can get a bit hard to keep track of everything reading cereal so it might not need more for those reading in bulk.

Nicholas Del Rossi

lol i just wrote a whole bunch of stuff i thought might be cool to see, should have restarted the chapter to see if any comments were there before making my own.

Nicholas Del Rossi

Irwin that ship was made to carry! not be carried! i wonder if Irwin will finely spot his stalker? also wonder what the last weaky chapter will focus on, seems like we are moving into a time skip of about a year? will we get tidbits from Irwin? the home world? the center branches as they learn about Irwin? maybe some update's on the places Irwin and co have visited? or could be we see some new faces from the invaders and the group of Acenti they met last time we saw them, or maybe a little bit of the maybe, probably world card, would be cool to get a world card or chaos whale perspective and if it has any sense of the aspect of itself it left to Irwin and how that is progressing.

Carrarn

So, for those wondering who the hell Zir'dor was - I somehow managed to forget him. He was the Ganvil that came with Rindiri when she left on her own, to protect The Sonata. I've made a note to add him in... I'm unsure how I managed to forget him as he is part of Rindiri's crew list :/ That all said, we are going to be having a bit of a set of timejumps starting now. Let me know how much details, and what kind of things you would like to see?


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