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Adastra Build 0.2 - Getting to Know Everyone
🕑 Added 2019-01-26 07:04:07 +0000 UTCWIN:https://www.mediafire.com/file/ac54pipqmyqi84s/Adastra-0.2-win.zip/file
MAC:https://www.mediafire.com/file/oah47kclo648o7z/Adastra-0.2-mac.zip/file
Next Adastra build!
So this was a more difficult part of the story, being between the first meeting and when the story really picks up. I'm hoping that I kept things interesting, but if you have any thoughts about the pacing please feel free to share. Also, you'll all be the first to see this build, so if you notice any typos or any other type of errors, please let me know so we can get it fixed before the public release sometime next month. Thanks so much for your support guys, and I hope you enjoy!
Comments
Sean
I played this for the first time and I love it so far! Though I did get just a little lost during the lore dump with Alexios, lol
Proto
I'm liking the character building and world (universe?) building. The insect and arachnid thing sounds prehistoric from an Earth perspective and is a good reminder that this is an alien planet. I noticed only a few minor typos: "It's hard to tell how big it since it's a good ways away..." (missing 'is' between it and since) "The both stop in the doorway..." (The to They) "'I'll bet even fewer can say they've met and abandoned species...'" (and to an). Good update and can't wait to see more.
Really enjoying the story so far. The music is especially beautiful. Some grammar QA: "sometime" -> "some time" and "sensibilities" -> "sensitivities"
I really enjoyed this build. Can't wait for the next update
Teoroby
Even better than the first build . Excellent character development and a very strong narrative. The only complaint i have is that it could have been better with more background art , but the sprites make up for it
