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Serenity Dev Log (10 March 2021)

🕑 Added 2021-03-10 15:31:37 +0000 UTC

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Maknzy

I feel that Lena, Jas and Rin were written to fall for the MC, and it did miss an opportunity to grow their relationships to the MC. Now knowing this, maybe in your next work you have an chance to expand a bit more to your story and give even more depth to your characters. I am not one that needs the MC to be involved in every bit of sex that a story has. Maybe there are other side relationships that grow? The point being, I am not the writer. This is your story to tell me how it goes, I am merely along for the journey. I am enjoying the VN for the story it tells, so you just keep being you please.

Cory F 41

Apologies for jumping to conclusions. "Quality time with...x", tends to make one a tad guarded and suspicious. Meaning, I thought Camilla was to spend quality time with...x. ;) Man, I need to wake up with more caffeine before I read.

Cory F 41

Thanks for clearing that up. I was really only stating my opinion. I do appreciate your candor. Cheers.


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