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Serenity C2 Episode 3 (Devlog 2)
🕑 Added 2023-10-27 18:38:50 +0000 UTCHello and happy weekend my friends...
Serenity Chapter 2: Episode 3 development is well underway. Originally, I had skipped doing this update and instead chose to work on Last Human again. I did that because I needed to rewrite Serenity ep3. Right now, I have most of it written and I am in the process of going back through it and making adjustments. This process will take me maybe a couple more weeks to complete. Serenity has a lot of plot pieces to keep track of, so that's the reason I'll need time to go through it and make sure everything works (before I start doing graphics). Not to mention the adjustments I have desperately needed to make for some time now. So far, I am very happy with the direction I've chosen and now it feels a lot more like Serenity.
A big part of my plan going forward is working on the pace of the story. Reading through everything I've done so far (with both Serenity and Last Human), it feels like things still happen too quickly and small details are left to just be 'assumed'. Just as MC and the harem need to focus on bringing balance between the fade and shade, I need to find a balance between the length of a scene when writing it, and when reading it. When I work on a scene for a long time, it starts to 'feel' long when in fact, it is much shorter when actually playing through it. So, I am working on that. This was something useful I've seen commented on in reviews and have taken note of.
All stories need some kind of drama for characters to face, a problem to be solved, some 'struggles', etc... What's coming up in Serenity will be a bit more than what you're used to seeing from me. We need to see more emotion from the girls, and even from the MC himself. And more so, how they deal with that. This next phase of the story will probably go through a few episodes. A lot will be happening, so brace yourselves.
Now don't panic because of what I said above. There will be some fun stuff to see also. We'll be interacting with a lot of the girls, some will be leaving, some will just be moving to earth. Kat, Rin, Jasmine, Lena, Morgan, and Trixy are the main 'harem' and will remain of course. And there are events planned with some of the other 'side' characters.
Have a great weekend! Meanwhile, enjoy this little render of Jasmine! And if you haven't played the latest version of Last Human, it is public and free: Last Human EP3 Release (PUBLIC)
Love you all, ...Fire
Comments
Aj Whitacre
As always ty for keeping us in the know Fire and just remember your one man with work and family just make sure to not over due yourself we will always be her waiting for the best two AVN going Happy Halloween Fire
DeadMan
Played it twice and am ready for more when you think it's it's ready. As long as I'm not Jasmine's target I can watch her throw fire all day.
Sapphire Nyx
Okay, what you just wrote in the third paragraph made me really excited! Can't wait to see more of that!
