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(AxN) World Map

🕑 Added 2025-08-19 00:01:30 +0000 UTC
(AxN) World Map

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Coreal

Finally, a review! so bro, could I know what exactly you didn’t like? To be clear: the plot I’m planning is that Amon and Nahil are the admins. There will be crossovers, and later comes the fusion part—not of entire worlds, but of either people or pieces of land. Amon and Nahil each have their own personalities, and I’ll write side chapters for them, explaining the past—especially for Nahil, and why he really chose Amon. After some crossovers, there will also be a ruling system for the people in the void, with rewards, alliances, and so on. One of the rewards will be revival. (Since I’m planning to revive Yoriichi, tbh.) I also have a plan for character development and some animes. I’m just telling you all this so you can point out what’s bad, or share your ideas.

Lost4rt

Alright, so honest review: Your writing ability is good, but the plot and premise for the story itself is something I really don't like.

Chainless

No need to make the chapter perfect from the start write post then after some days read them again and improve

§Rararembo§

Buroto is anime fanfiction


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